如何寫有禮貌商務Email【文書助理必備】
而家科技日新月異,與人溝通既方式愈來愈多,除左直接打電話外,仲可以用一D社交平台,例如WhatsApp、WeChat、Line、Facebook、Messenger、Instagram等等既APP,當然,呢D都比較適用私人用途既。但相信大部分公司仍會要求員工用比較正式既電郵方式Email去聯絡同回覆客戶查詢,又或者上司、同事或客戶既來往公司溝通等。
咁要點樣寫一封可以比較正式又輕鬆D既Email,同時避免到無禮貌既情況呢?
1. 開頭仲用緊Dear Sir or Madam? To Whom It May Concern?

不過有時會遇到唔知電郵既收件人男定女,點稱呼,係咪第一個時間都會諗到用Dear Sir,Dear Madam,又或者係用To Whom It May Concern,作為Email既開頭?以前學校老師都會教我地用呢D字會顯得正式又有禮貌,但其實並非如此,因為Dear Sir / Madam,會俾人感覺似係未做好功課咁,未了解收件人係邊個。第二個用To Whom It May Concern,聽落去似係有少少命令收件人「有關既人請聽好」,顯得有D無禮貌,或者To Whom It May Concern類似中文「敬啟者」既意思,比較嚴肅。
有無咩字詞可以代替Dear Sir,Dear Madam,To Whom It May Concern?
① Dear [Department / Position],
如果知道收件人所屬部門或職位,可考慮用對方既部門或職位做開首。
例如:Dear Human Resources Department / Dear Hiring Manager
② Greetings,
如果係一般查詢,可考慮類似中文電郵開首「你好」既Greetings。
③ Hi, there, / Hello, there,
呢個可以用係非正式Email,適合用係Email俾大眾既郵件。
④ Good Morning, / Good Afternoon,
有時亦可以用早晨、午安等用語代替開首嫁,用法較為親切隨意。
2. Well-received = 我已收到?

有時大家收到對方既回覆,可能禮貌上都會用Email覆返對方收到啦,但大家要留意,Well-received或者Well received with thanks並非表示為「已收到」或「已讀」,因為Well-received係Collins Dictionary既真正意思係「having been greeted or reviewed with approval」,即係「某件事物受到歡迎或認可」,尤其係用係演講、電影或書本收到好好反應時既回應。
有無咩字詞可以代替「已收到電郵」?
① Received with thanks.
② Well noted.
③ Noted with thanks.
④ This is to confirm that I have received your email.
⑤ We have already received your email and will get back to you shortly.
⑥ Thank you for your email.
⑦ This is to acknowledge receipt of your email.
⑧ Your email has been received.
但如果事情已經處理好後,唔需要兼又唔想收到對方既「已收到電郵」既呢一類回覆,大家不妨係郵件上標明「no reply necessary」或「no need for reply email」,咁就可以避免尷尬同完結件事。
3. 催人回覆加上Urgent(緊急)字?

有時想對方盡快回覆,又有可能收件人經常都唔覆email,大家可能都會係Email入面或者標題上加上「Urgent」既字,希望對方盡快回覆,亦希望可以引起收件人既注意,但記得唔好濫用「Urgent」呢個字,分分鐘變成「狼來了」而適得其反嫁,或者大家可以係Email內容上寫明個回覆時間或者日期,同緊急既原因,等對方可以因應限期時間而作出回覆或者跟進。
有無咩字詞可以代替Urgent(緊急)?
① Please get back to me as soon as possible.
② I’d appreciate your prompt response.
③ Your prompt response would be appreciated.
④ Please reply at your earliest convenience.
⑤ Looking forward to your reply.
⑥ Hope to hear from you soon.
⑦ Thank you in advance for your quick response.
⑧ Please consider this a priority.
但如果非要想顯示出件事情真係好趕,好緊急,但又唔想俾對方太大壓力,亦可以用「Time-sensitive」黎代替「Urgent」嫁,同時亦可以係信件最後寫多一句「If you feel you need more time than that, please let us know.」,咁樣就可以令到對方就無咁大壓力啦。
【12個職場熱門關鍵字】潮語相信唔使小編解釋大家都知道,但係香港職場上既關鍵字,大家又聽過幾多?例如「安靜招聘」、「最低限度星期一」、「迴旋鏢員工」,大家又有無特別留意過或者聽過?作為一個與時並進嘅打工仔,尤其係高街管理層或者上司,冇理由唔知道⋯⋯ 繼續閱讀
4. Yours sincerely / Yours faithfully / Best regards ?

Email既結尾,好多時都會用Yours sincerely,Yours faithfully,Best regards呢D,但係有無分別?Yours sincerely同Yours faithfully會用係「正式書信」上,例如第一次同客戶、公司聯絡,又或者對方係大客戶、政府機構既時候會用既;而Best regards 呢類就係用「非正式書信」上,例如係同同事溝通、或者本身同客戶關係好好,都可以用既。Yours sincerely同Yours faithfully 2者係有少許差別既,要因應返信件既開首,如果係知道收件人既姓名,就會用Yours sincerely,相反如果係唔知道收件人既姓名,就會用Yours faithfully。
有無咩字詞可以代替Yours sincerely / Yours faithfully / Best regards?
① Yours respectfully
② Yours truly
③ With gratitude
④ Best wishes
以上就係4個寫郵件需要注意既小事項,尤其同公司客戶進行電子郵件往來既時候,代表公司既同時,一個適當同體面既措辭,有利於體現你既專業形象之外,仲可以容易拉近雙方之間既距離同關係,從而提高左洽談工作成功既機會率嫁。我地Kama Delivery到會服務除左可以透過Email查詢之外,大家仲可以利用WhatsApp俾我地查詢嫁,十分方便。
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